Lian ca awake gasping.
The pain hit first—everywhere at once, a full-body scream that made his vision flash white before it even focused. Broken ribs grated against each other with every shallow breath. His left femur was a jagged ruin, the snapped end grinding through muscle every ti he twitched. Blood crusted his lips, his nose, the corners of his eyes. One ear was swollen shut, leaking slow warmth down his neck. His right forearm bent at a sickening angle, bone protruding through torn skin in a white splinter.
He lay on his back in cold sand.
The arena—or whatever this place pretended to be—remained empty.
No silver thread from above.
No faint glow.
Just darkness so complete it felt like drowning in ink.
He braced.
Body tensed for the next kick.
The invisible boot that had shattered him again and again.
Muscles locked.
Breath held.
Waiting.
Nothing ca.
Seconds stretched.
Then minutes.
No impact.
No voice.
Only the wet rasp of his own breathing and the distant drip of water sowhere far away.
He exhaled slowly—pain lancing through cracked ribs—and forced himself to move.
First the good arm.
Palm pressed into sand.
Grain bit into open wounds.
He pushed.
Body scread.
He ignored it.
Rolled to his side.
Sand stuck to blood.
He dragged his shattered leg behind him, the broken bone ends scraping bone on bone.
A low, involuntary sound escaped his throat—not a scream, just air forced through clenched teeth.
He got to one knee.
Then the other.
Then—using the wall for support—he stood.
Legs shook.
Vision swam.
He leaned against cracked stone, forehead pressed to cold surface.
Waiting again.
Still nothing.
No kick.
No voice.
Just silence.
And the certainty that sothing was watching.
He turned slowly.
Scanned the darkness.
Empty tiers rose into black.
No movent.
No sound.
Then—footsteps.
Soft.
Deliberate.
Coming from the far side of the platform.
Lian straightened as much as his ruined body allowed.
Hand reached for a blade that wasn’t there.
The footsteps drew closer.
Steady.
Unhurried.
Too dark to see more than a silhouette at first—tall, lean, moving with the sa careful economy Lian had trained into himself.
Closer.
The silver thread above flickered—just once—enough to catch the outline.
Closer still.
Face erged from shadow.
Lian’s breath caught.
It was him.
The sa ssy black hair.
The sa sharp jaw, high cheekbones, dark skin scarred by years of forge and fight.
The sa electric-blue eyes—once bright with kindness, now cold void mirrors of his own.
Everything identical.
Clothing the sa—torn miner’s jacket, patched pants, boots crusted with old blood.
Even the way he stood—weight balanced, shoulders relaxed but ready—was Lian’s stance.
A perfect double.
The double stopped three paces away.
Tilted his head slightly.
Smiled.
The smile was wrong.
Too sharp.
Too knowing.
Lian spoke first.
Voice cracked, raw from blood and screaming.
“Who are you?”
The double’s smile widened.
Mocking.
Gentle.
“I am you.”
The tone dripped amusent—like an adult explaining sothing obvious to a child.
Lian stared.
Confusion warred with pain.
“What... are you?”
The double laughed once—short, cold.
“You created .”
He spread his arms slightly, as if presenting himself for inspection.
“Every ti you swallowed a heart. Every ti you took an eye. Every ti you let the whispers in instead of spitting them out.”
He stepped closer.
Lian didn’t retreat.
Couldn’t.
Legs wouldn’t hold much longer.
“You fed ,” the double continued. “Piece by piece. Until there was enough of to stand on my own.”
He tapped his own chest—right over the heart.
“Better version.”
Mocking tone again.
“Stronger. Faster. Smarter. No weakness. No sentint. No promises to dead uncles or half-machine girls.”
He circled Lian slowly.
Lian tracked him—head turning, vision still blurry.
The double stopped behind him.
Leaned in close.
Voice soft in his ear.
“I am what you wanted to beco.”
Lian clenched broken teeth.
Blood dripped from his lip.
“This place...”
The double chuckled.
“Your inner domain.”
He gestured at the empty tiers.
“Everyone has one. Most never find the door. So open it and run screaming. You...”
He stepped back in front.
Smiled wider.
“You walked in and asked to be beaten until you broke.”
Lian’s good hand curled into a fist.
“What’s the use?”
The double laughed again—genuine this ti, delighted.
“You don’t need to know yet.”
He jumped then—light, playful—hopping around Lian like a child showing off.
Landing softly each ti.
Laughing.
“You don’t need to know anything yet.”
He stopped.
Facing Lian again.
All playfulness vanished.
Killing intent rolled off him like heat from a forge.
Sudden.
Suffocating.
The air thickened.
Lian’s broken ribs scread with every inhale.
The double’s eyes—identical void—locked on his.
Voice low.
Dangerous.
“Why are you so weak?”
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