Escape From Konoha

Everythinghastobestudiedtounderstanditsmeaning,ChibaShiraishirealizedthatwhenhehad...Readmore

Everythinghastobestudiedtounderstanditsmeaning,ChibaShiraishirealizedthatwhenhehadtransmigratedtoanewworldhehasnoknowledgeof,heonlyknewhewasinthevillageofKonoha.Shiraishicouldn’tsleep,sohetookoutthebookhehadpickedup“TheWillofFire”andreaditcarefullyinthemiddleofthenight,onlytoseethewordsincracks.Thewholebookwaswrittenwithtwowords–PyramidScheme.Shiraishifelthesitantandfearfulforawhile,andhedecidedthatsoonerorlater,hemustescapefromthisbrainwashingorganizationcalledKonoha.Collapse

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Ijustreadthewholething,honestlyit'snotbad,especiallyforafanfic.Irateitas7/10sincethemcturnedintothirdratevillianatthestartofthe"Fourth"NinjaWorldWar.Otherthanthatisallgood.Ijustwishedthisstoryfocusedmoreonchakrascienceorwhatever,itwasthemostinterestingpartofthestoryforme.AlsoIkindahopedmcwoulddestroytheninjaworldbycreatingakindofsageartcompatiblewithhumansthusbasicallycreatingcultivationlmao.Thatsaid,gointothisstoryifyoulikedelvingintothechakrascience,reimaginationofNaruto(theseries)andkingdombuilding.Otherthanthat,thestoryisnothingmuch.Thelastfewarcsdefhadamajordropinqualitybutigtheauthoristiredofwritinganarutofanficforover2yearsandjustwanttofinishit.Itisover850+chapterslongafterall.Overall,readitifyouwanttoreadagoodnarutofanficsincethisistheonlygoodnarutofanfic.

Ha!

AtthemomentIhavereaduptochapter257.I'llberealoriginallywhenIfirststartedreadingitIdroppeditafter50~60chapterbecausethetranslationIwasreadingwasjustthatbad.EventuallyIfounditagainbeingtranslatedbyChizihnwhoIthinkdecidedtocontinueaftertheoriginalguystoppedtranslating.Atleastthat'smyreasoningforwhyhisfirst60orsochaptersinthetranslationaresobad.WhichIfoundimprovesdrasticallyatthechapter80pointlastIremembered.(Don'tmequotethis,Imightbewrong)Anywaysthestoryreallydoesgetinterestingafterchapter109~114becauseatthatpointtheMCactuallydoes"EscapeKonoha".TheonethingthatreallyinterestmeaboutthenovelwhichIfeelisn'tdirectlyexpressedandIfoundreallyhardtounderstandatfirstbeforethenoveltranslationimprovementedinqualitywouldhavetobethefactthattheMCdoesn'tknow"Naruto".Throughoutthestoryhedoesn'thave"futureknowledge"toholdbackonwhichIlikedbecauseforsomestoriesIhavereaditseemslikesuchacrutchforthecharactermotivations/planing.Aswellasthefactthatitmakesthestorylesspredictable.SomeaspectsorimportantplotpointstillhappenbutyoucanseehowtheMCeffectstheseseventsnotthroughhimknowingtheperfectthingtodoinadvancebutwithhimjustbeingthereorexperiencingtheaftereffects.LastlyIreallylikethefactthattheMCisn’tactuallythemainfocus.Ironicallywithinthestoryeveryonemainlyfocusesonthe2teammatestheMChasgiventhattherebothaUchihaandHyuga.He'smoreofanobodytoeveryonebecauseeveryonedoesn'tknowhowpowerfulhe'sisgiventhathedoesn'thaveaconventionalpowerset.[I'mnotsurehowtotalkabouthis"power's"withoutspoilingit.]Iwouldn'trecommendforanyonewhohatesMTL.EventhentheMTLisreadableattheveryleastforthefirst60unlikesomeothernovelsIhaveattemptedtoread.ThebreakpointforwhentranslationsimproveasItalkedaboutpreviouslyisthe80chapterpoint.IfyouwanttoreaditIwouldrecommendreadinguptochapter114Iwouldsaythatit'sreallythecutofpointforwhereitturnsformamehnoveltoaactuallygoodoneAnywaysIwouldprobablygiveitarounda4.3Starsoutof5stars.Ithinkthatwhatreallyruinsitwouldhavetobethefactthatthefirst60chaptersaren'ttranslatedverywell,whichcouldhavechangedbutlastIrememberhaven't.Aswellasthecompoundingfactorthatthestorytakesaslowerpacetorampup/importantplotdevelopmentswithinthefirst60chaptercangetglossedoverwiththebadtranslationwhichnotonlystopspeoplefromreadingfurtherbutcausesproblemsforlaterchaptersifyoudidn’tunderstandittobeginwith.-Alsowhoeverdecidedthecoverartforthissiteeitherhasn'treadthestoryorisgoingtomakemeeatmywordsifMCbecomeswhatevermonstrositythatisinthatpicture.-IfhedoesbecomethatI'llchangemyreviewto1star.4.3/5

Yo!IstheUchihaclandestroyedinthisfanfic?

YesandNo(Ithink?).Inthefanfic,aftertheMCescapedKonohatheUchihaclansplitintotwocamps.ThosewhoremainedinKonohasufferedthesamefateasintheanime/manga.

Maybenotsureyet,likeNightEdgesaidtheresplitintotwocamps.SofarinthestorytheclaninKonohahasn'tbeendestroyedbutlooksliketheymostlywillbedestroyed.Thoughtheremightbeaplotaboutgoingbacktostealsomemembersbeforeit'sdestructionthough.ToberealitreallyglossedovertheotherUchihaatthispointinthestory.IthinktheywilltalkmoreabouttheotherclanthatleftKonohaaftertheclanisdestroyed.

IthinkIreadthisrubbishonmtl,achatty,boringwork,aguywithoutanyobjectivepretendinghewantstoescape.RankD-

Icouldn’tgetpast100chapters,everythingseemstobenotbad,butMcformepersonallyisextremelyboringandmorallyweak(maybeitwillchangelater,butIdon’thavethestrengthtoreaditanymore).Mchenpeckedwhoalwaysobeysandisafraidofhisgirlfriend(whoisatsundere),Ihatethosethemost.Andso,inprinciple,youcanreadit,thereisnothingdisgustingorveryinterestinginthisnovel,justanaveragenoveltokilltime.

Damn,thisisoneoftheugliestcoversI'veeverseen.Definitelyatop3.

Horribleconceptandexecution

Notworthreading.IreaditonRRbeforeanddroppeditatabout50chapters.I’lljustpastethatreviewandthenmakeadditionsafterwards.I’m80%surethisisatranslation.Nothingagainsttranslationsontheirownbuttheytendtobeofalesserqualitysimplybecausetranslatorstendtonotbeveryskilledwriters.Totranslateapoematwiceasskilledpoetisrequiredandallthat.Theregularjokesaboutcapitalismbeinghorriblegottiresomeafterthefirstfewinstances.Charactersareprettyonedimensionalandcanbesummedupbytheirintroductoryparagraph.TheMCisageniusbecausethewriterwrote3sentencesandthat’sit.TheothercharacterssupporttheMCjustbecause,andit’sgettinghardtodescribehowthestoryismediocrewithoutgivingspecificsituationsthusgivingminorspoilers.ReaditifyouhavenothingelsetoreadorreallywanttoreadaNarutofan-ficthathastheMCreallydislikeKonohaforaveryshallowreason.Thisstoryisverymediocre,grammarwiseit’sokey,thecharactersareshallow,andoverallitismeh.Ikindawishthesiterequired,orevengavetheoption,fornovelposterstoletusknowifitisatranslation.Everycharacterisshallow,neverchanges,andactsforthebenefitoftheMCdisregardinganylogicorhowsomeonewouldactuallyact.3/10.RoyalRoadusedtobeawebsitewhereyoucouldbesurethattheworkspostedwouldbeofadecentqualityevenifyouwouldn’tpersonallyreadit.Now1/10worksaretranslationsand1/5isbrainlesssmutfanfictions.

Anythingworthreadinginthisnewbatch?

IDK.Stayingawayfromthechinesetranslationsisalmostalwaysasafechoiceanditseemslikeagoodchoicethistimeaswell.ThefewthatIlookedoverwerenotgoodwithoneofthembeingbarelyok.Ihaven’treadmanyofthemyetsoIcan’treallymakemanyinputs.Edit:Mostofeverythingwasnotgood.ItseemstheonlyonesthataregoodaretheonesIstartreadingjustasthewebsitestartstouploadnewones.

Ican'treadrealnovelsanymore.OnlyChineseslopwebnovelsaregoodenough.

''P2WUchihainKonoha''istheONLYverygoodnarutochinesefanfic,almostthegreatestfanficofall

Itriedreadingthatbutitjustwasn’tanythinggreat.Itseemedlikeithadthesamebasicproblemsofeverychinesenovel(brainlessharem,capitalismbad,womenbendover,MCisbetter,etc…).

Honestlyyoushouldtryagain,itgetsverygoodalittlelater,thedefaultsexistbutthequalitiesaresostrongthattheymakeyouforgetthem.

Justrealizedyournameandknowwhyyoulikeitnow.

Nahseriouslyfromastrictlyliterarypointofviewitgetsverygoodprettyquickly,andtheharemstuffisprettywelldoneanddon'ttaketoomuchstory-space(btwthewayhegotTsunademademecry,franklyitwasheartwarming),andit'snoteventhemainpointofthestory,thewayheplayedpoliticsagainsttheHokagearoundchapter150-200wasveryclever.Thewritingstyleisgood,moreformalthanmoststory,descriptive,nottoorepetitive,andthechaptersarepleasanttoread.

Royalroaddroppedeversinceeverysingleauthorsdidthatwholereviewbotthing.Honestly,thesiteuiwasn'teventhatgoodsoIcan'tevenfindgoodnovelswithoutclickingafewdozentimes.Switchedtoscribblehub,muchcleaneruiandatleastyoucantrusttheratings.

YeahbutScribblehubhasahigherpercentageofshittyposterswithnosectionthathasvettedcontent.Icanrecognizeabout10thatpostmultipleworkseverydayandnoneoftheirworksaregood.Theydon’tjustpostoneortwobutoveradozenworkseachsoforabout4hourseverydaytheonlythingonthefeedistheirshittycontent.AtleastRRhasawaylargeruploadpoolsotheamountofbadworkstakinguptheirfeedislowerandtheyhaveadecent“Goodworks”insteadofa“Mostpopular”section.Andmanywritersdon’thavebotsontheirworks.

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