A novel filled with character deaths?
Several lines of frustration dropped on Su Jiang’s forehead. How co she was unaware that her novel had such a unique "pet na"? Although it was true that from the beginning to the middle and then the end, there were indeed quite a few characters eting their demise, it couldn’t be described that way...
Even though her mind was filled with complaints, Su Jiang honestly confessed and revealed the true situation, "Yes, it has already been published. If you want to read it, you can search for ’Tragic Life of Su Shaojiang,’ you should be able to find it..."
On the other end of the neural network, upon learning the na, Lucy was instantly taken aback. Sure enough, Xiao ng is just terrible at naming things. A book title should at least sound high-end, atmospheric, and prestigious, making people instantly feel intense admiration when they see it. Look at Princess Fusu—’Sky Covering,’ ’Legend of Immortal,’ and ’Breaking the Sky’—aren’t all these titles simply mind-blowingly cool?
In contrast, her na looks every bit like a third-rate novice! Of course, Lucy wouldn’t say these things out loud. After all, book titles can be changed upon application. As long as Xiao ng realizes that the na is inappropriate, she would probably correct it!
After disconnecting from Su Jiang, Lucy imdiately searched for this book. Having already read the first few Chapters from Su Jiang earlier, she skipped them and continued reading. Although she had set her mind, "Since it’s written by Xiao ng, no matter how difficult it is to read, I will persist," she found it wasn’t as terrible as she had imagined. At least the writing was fluent and the layout was considered rigorous...
Of course, Lucy and Liu Dongyi both thought the sa—the female protagonist’s character at the beginning was really frustrating.
From a reader’s perspective, encountering such an irritating, indecisive female protagonist already at the beginning makes the likelihood of abandoning the text quite high! Hmm... Should we discuss with Xiao ng about tweaking the protagonist’s temperant a bit?
Lucy continued reading, and found that the originally liked characters at the opening all t their demise, leaving her helpless. Xiao ng really mastered the art of self-destruction! The protagonist’s temper is undesirable, the liked characters et their demise—she’s not tornting the protagonist, but the readers!
However, when she saw the protagonist’s temperant gradually changing after several setbacks, she let out a small breath of relief.
To be honest, in the grand backdrop of the Interstellar Future, those gentle, kind-hearted, even pushover female characters can only serve as pretty vases. In today’s cha-dominant tis, the public prefers strong, domineering, occasionally demonic, and sotis cunning female protagonists. Hopefully, Xiao ng can realize this and write the protagonist’s character towards the mainstream direction...
The initial content had inherent flaws, and if not handled well afterwards, this novel might end up neglected by all.
Of course, Lucy never expected that Su Jiang did write the "protagonist’s" character towards the mainstream—strong, domineering, and occasionally demonic. However, along the path of character growth, a bunch of supporting characters ended up ’eting their demise’... In Su Jiang’s words, growth requires a bloody price, and this price can be oneself or others...
Although the protagonist’s initial character had major flaws that could easily scare off readers, the description of the grand backdrop aroused curiosity. At least Lucy was now knocking on Su Jiang’s door remotely, wanting to know from her what exactly the Insect Race was and what Telekinesis was...
In the Interstellar Future, novels are countless, and elents similar to the Insect Race are not lacking. However, Lucy felt that this "Insect Race" wouldn’t be that simple. Compared to other novels’ vague descriptions, Xiao ng’s portrayal of the Insect Race was more specific and vivid...
Su Jiang naturally wouldn’t reveal much about this, just gave a brief introduction and then went on with her own business. As for Lucy’s pressing and relentless demands for updates? Oh, sorry, she didn’t sleep well last night, accidentally suffered temporary deafness, didn’t hear it.
Because of Lucy’s urging, seeing that there was still ti, Su Jiang opened her docunt and continued typing rapidly.
The following scenes were rather happy and relaxed, or let’s say, the rare, clean mories of Su Jiang’s second life. Without the threat of the Insect Race, without the pressure of death, simple and clean training, accompanied by a boyhood friend with a gentle and clean temperant by her side.
However, all participants in the training were geniuses whom the Alliance held high hopes for, and they wouldn’t bow to one another, naturally leading to friction. Coupled with Su Jiang’s consecutive losses of close relatives, her temper beca sharp and sensitive, akin to a dynamite with a fuse—ready to ignite at any mont.
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