So I'm quite curious, what are your expectations when you read this story?
What part attracted you about this story?
How do you feel about the progress of the story?
Do you wish to provide any feedback or suggestions? Write in the comnts
As I said, it's Au, many things will change. Pellegrini left in 2013 originally, but I kept him so it's not so unbelievable for Malaga to excel tactically. It's fiction, but I try to keep it as realistic as possible.
The structure and atmosphere of a small club is different than the rest. So so issues in big clubs are not that impactful in Malaga. Their dressing room vibes, players interaction are different. Not gonna brag, but I played for small clubs as a kid, I do have so real life experience, although it is way different from the pro leagues. That's why I try explain that things aren't straight forward as it seems to be.
I can get that after reading many fics, you have a preset mind that so things are ant to be, or don't make sense. But I wish to change that, this fic won't follow the usual trope, yet it won't be so that MC isn't valued for his worth. I get that it's not believable for so, but it's a fiction to satisfy our inner desire to be a star, take the journey, and dreams don't end in disappointnt.
So might think it's rushed and he becos op quickly. To them I ask this, If you got the skills of two superstars fully, are you going to fail and struggle easily? That's just skill issue. Not to ntion he was a decent talent before in La Masia and trained for 4 years.
The current skills and abilities might seem overwhelming, but there's a limit. He can't win them all on his own, but he's got decent support as the whole team strategy is ford around him, with much more freedom to move.
Not to ntion he is a midfielder, not purely attacker. The goals might seem a bit much, but most of them ca due to underestimating him or pure skill. I an his stats are already pretty good with 90 in two. and with two pro footballers skills, it's surprising if he doesn't play well. It's not like he's scoring 3 goals and 3 assists every match like Long Aotian and everyone is bending over for him. 😑
I don't claim to be the best author, neither am I professional. I write for fun, and not just blindly follow stats and reaserch for everything. I have watched football since 2002 , and my dad was a Brazil fan, Although I preferred Portugal due to Ronaldo and Spain, cz I watched la liga a lot and liked the style.
I have seen the changes over the years and so things left a bad taste in my mouth.
So in this fic, I'll change that . I already got so many complaints that I'm not following original fixtures or team lineup exactly, and I wont in many cases. that's all necessary to make it interesting and unpredictable.
Today, I even got a comnt it's sa as chinese fics 😂😂 If you guys also feel that way, I'm just gonna stop right here, apologize for wasting my ti and yours, and yeet myself outta here xD I write for you folks, and I'll respect the majority opinion.
So let's clear up all the confusion and anybody feels it's not suitable for them, I can only politely guide you mtl or other fics. There's a decent Translation I'm reading, so there are other options, I won't force you to read, or hold a gun to your head to praise this. Complints co from heart.
But if you're just trolling, I'm not going to entertain that. I had enough of that in my other books. I feel I had to clarify these things before I invested more ti into this.
Criticism is fine , but it has to make sense. I hope we all can agree to that .
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