This is based on a fantasy country but still in the real earth.
1usd = 10 Veyra Marks (VM)
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Aurelia City Hospital.
Jake Rivers woke to a ceiling that was too white to be real.
The fluorescent lights above him humd in a steady, indifferent way, like they’d been doing it for years and would keep doing it long after he stopped caring. A monitor sowhere to his left beeped with a rhythm that suggested life was a simple equation—on, off, repeat.
He tried to blink. His eyelids felt heavy, as if soone had stitched weights into them. A dull ache pulsed behind his left eye.
Jake swallowed, throat dry. His tongue tasted like cotton and tal. He turned his head slightly and winced; even that tiny movent made the pressure behind his eye swell like a bruise being pressed.
mory drifted back in pieces.
A basketball court. A noisy evening. Friends laughing. The squeak of shoes on concrete. A careless elbow, faster than he’d expected. The sharp sting. The sudden warmth running down his cheek.
Then... hospital lights. Then nothing.
He tried to lift his hand. The movent ca slow, like his muscles were underwater. His fingers found the edge of a bandage wrapped around his head. He stopped himself from touching it further. The last thing he needed was to rip sothing open.
He turned his head again, more carefully this ti, and saw a glass wall with a faded poster on it: *Surgical Ward: Patient Safety Is Everyone’s Responsibility.*
The words were almost funny.
He wasn’t supposed to be awake yet. He knew that much.
The doctor had said sothing about sedation, about keeping him under while swelling reduced. Two weeks, maybe. That’s what his mother had been told—Jake rembered her face when they explained it, how she’d tried to nod like she understood while panic spread in her eyes.
Yet here he was, awake after... what? A week?
A door clicked open.
A man in a clean coat stepped in, tablet in hand. He was middle-aged, hair cropped short, his expression neutral in the practiced way doctors learned when they didn’t want to give bad news too early.
"Mr. Rivers," he said. His voice was calm, professional. "You’re awake."
Jake’s mouth opened, but his voice ca out hoarse. "How long?"
"Eight days." The man glanced down at the tablet. "You gave us a scare."
Jake took a breath, felt the pull behind his left eye. "My eye?"
The doctor’s gaze flicked to the bandage, then back to Jake’s face. "There was a complication during the procedure. So bleeding. We addressed it imdiately."
Jake didn’t like the word complication. It was the kind of word adults used when they didn’t want to say *sothing went wrong*.
He forced his mind to settle. Panicking wouldn’t change anything. "Am I going to see?"
The doctor studied him for a mont, as if gauging whether Jake would handle the truth or not.
"You’re going to see," he said finally. "We’ll monitor how well. But the prognosis is not... alarming."
Not alarming didn’t an good. It ant *we don’t know yet.*
Jake nodded once. "Okay."
The doctor’s brows rose slightly, like he’d expected Jake to argue or beg for certainty. "How are you feeling? Any pain?"
"Pressure," Jake said. "Mostly left side."
"That’s expected." The doctor tapped on his tablet. "We’ll lower your pain dication. Your body has been healing well. You’ll likely be discharged within twenty-four hours."
Jake stared at him, processing.
Discharged. That ant ho. That ant his parents. That ant school. That ant... work.
He swallowed again. His part-ti job was a small thing to other people, but to Jake it had been oxygen. It paid for transport, food between classes, and—more importantly—the little money he’d been trying to grow through trading.
He’d been grinding for months, turning small deposits into slightly less small deposits, losing most of it, then trying again because once you’ve tasted profit—even a tiny one—you start chasing the feeling like it’s proof you can escape.
A week in a hospital bed wasn’t just lost ti.
It was a slow-motion disaster.
The doctor stepped closer. "We’ll remove the bandage later today. Any other questions?"
Jake hesitated. There were dozens. *Who paid for this? How much did it cost? What if I can’t go back to school? What if my eye is ruined?*
But questions were expensive, and he didn’t have the energy to buy them right now.
"No," he said. "Not yet."
The doctor nodded, seemingly satisfied, and left.
Jake lay back and stared at the ceiling again. The beeping continued. The lights continued. The world continued, as if his life had not just been paused and rearranged without permission.
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They removed the bandage that afternoon.
A nurse unwound the layers carefully, as if peeling away an old secret. Jake kept his eyes shut until she told him he could open them.
"Slowly," she said. "Don’t strain."
Jake opened his right eye first. The room was the room. White walls, pale curtains, dical equipnt—ordinary. Then he opened his left. And the world sharpened.
Not just "clear." Not just "focused."
*Sharpened.*
The edges of objects seed outlined by a quiet certainty. Colors deepened. The green strip on the nurse’s ID badge looked richer, like soone had turned up the saturation. The tiny scratches on the tal fra of the bed caught light in crisp detail.
Jake blinked.
Nothing changed.
He looked at the nurse’s face and could see the faint texture of her skin, the fine lines that ca from laughing and squinting. He could see a small freckle near her jawline he hadn’t noticed before.
His heart thumped once, hard.
"Is that normal?" he asked.
The nurse smiled lightly, the kind of smile people used to make patients feel safe. "You’ve been under dication for days. Your senses can feel... heightened. It’ll settle."
Jake didn’t argue, but his mind flagged it.
*This isn’t dication.*
He’d studied finance, not dicine, but he knew what hallucinations felt like. This wasn’t distortion. It was the opposite—clarity so intense it felt unnatural.
A doctor ca later and repeated the sa reassurance. "Temporary effect. Your vision should normalize."
Jake nodded. He let them say what they needed to say. But inside, he filed it away.
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The next morning, the discharge process moved faster than he expected.
Paperwork. Instructions. A warning not to strain his eye. Follow-up appointnts.
His mother wanted to pick him up, but he didn’t want the fuss. He told her he’d take a taxi. She argued. He insisted. Eventually she gave in with the reluctant tone of soone who knew they couldn’t keep their son wrapped in safety forever.
Outside, the air felt fresher than it had any right to.
The city—Aurelia City, capital of the Republic of Veyra—moved with its usual rhythm. Cars poured through intersections. Vendors called out from sidewalks. Office workers flowed in and out of buildings like tides.
It was a modern place—glass towers near older streets, money and struggle living side by side with no clear boundary. The kind of city where soone could beco rich, and soone else could stay poor their whole life, and both could ride the sa bus.
Jake stood near the curb, one hand holding a thin plastic bag of dication, the other holding his phone.
He stared at the screen. He hadn’t called his boss yet.
There was no "right" way to do it. He’d been gone a week without warning. People didn’t keep part-ti employees on payroll out of sympathy.
Still, avoiding it wouldn’t help.
He pressed call. It rang twice before a voice answered. "Hello?"
Jake straightened. "Morning, sir. It’s Jake—Jake Rivers."
Silence for half a second. Then the voice shifted into sothing sarcastic and tired. "Ah. Well, look who rembered he exists."
Jake let the insult pass. He’d learned early that pride didn’t pay bills. "I’m sorry for disappearing. I was hospitalized. There was an accident last week and I had surgery. I—"
"I heard." The man cut him off. "Your mother ca by. Said you might be out for two weeks."
Jake’s throat tightened. "I’m out now. I can co in today if you need . I’m good—"
"Jake." The man’s tone softened slightly, but it didn’t make the words kinder. "I had to keep the business running. I hired soone else. I can’t leave shifts empty because soone got hurt. You understand."
Jake stared at the street. A taxi drove past slowly, then rged into traffic. He understood. Understanding didn’t stop the sinking feeling in his chest.
"Yes, sir," he said quietly.
"I’m sorry, kid." The man exhaled. "You were reliable. But this is how it is."
Jake swallowed. "Thank you for the past months."
The call ended.
Jake held the phone for a mont as if the screen might change its mind and offer him a different outco.
It didn’t.
He slipped the phone into his pocket. His face stayed calm, but his thoughts moved faster. No job ant no cash flow. No cash flow ant no deposits. No deposits ant no trading. No trading ant no escape.
And the worst part was that he’d already made mistakes in trading. He’d blown small accounts before. He’d promised himself he’d get disciplined—stop losses, risk managent, patience. But discipline was harder when the money you needed was the money you were losing.
He stepped closer to the curb and watched traffic. His left eye made everything look too clean, too vivid, like the city was a high-definition video soone had paused just for him.
A taxi pulled up.
"Where to?" the driver asked.
Jake gave his neighborhood and climbed in.
As the taxi moved, Jake watched the streets slide by—shops, people, billboards selling luxury apartnts and imported cars. Proof, everywhere, that money existed in absurd amounts.
Just not in his hands.
Not yet.
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Ho slled like cooking oil and fabric softener. It was familiar enough to make his chest ache.
Jake walked in quietly, set the dication bag on the kitchen counter, and went straight to his room. His parents were at work, his little sister at school. The house was empty in the way that made his thoughts louder.
He sat at his desk.
Laptop. Charger. A worn notebook filled with ssy trading notes—bad entries, worse exits, a few lucky wins circled like trophies.
He opened his laptop. The brokerage site loaded slowly, as if even the internet wanted to build suspense. Jake stared at the login screen and hesitated. He already knew what he’d find.
He’d opened positions before the accident. Not big ones, but reckless enough. No stop loss. Just "hope" as a strategy, because hope was free.
He typed in his password. The account dashboard appeared.
Balance: 0.00 Veyra Marks.
Jake’s face didn’t change. That was the first thing people noticed about him—he didn’t react loudly, even when his insides were collapsing.
But his stomach dropped anyway. He leaned back slightly and stared at the screen. No anger. No tears. Just a quiet, heavy awareness settling in.
He was broke.
Again.
Only this ti, he was broke with no job, a hospital bill coming, and parents who didn’t have money to burn on their adult son’s mistakes.
Jake closed the dashboard and opened a charting platform out of habit. He didn’t need to. It wouldn’t fix anything.
But his eyes moved across the screen anyway—candles forming patterns, lines moving like a language he’d been trying to learn for years.
He clicked through his usual pairs. Currency. Indices. Nothing made sense. Not because the charts were impossible, but because Jake’s brain was tired and bruised by failure.
Then—almost absentmindedly—he clicked on the gold market.
XAU/USD.
The chart loaded.
And sothing inside him... *shifted.*
It wasn’t a voice. It wasn’t a bright flash or dramatic music. It was like a hidden door in his mind opened quietly. Numbers didn’t just sit on the screen anymore. They *connected.*
Patterns surfaced with terrifying clarity. Price action stopped being random noise and beca intention—like the market was a living thing leaving footprints, and Jake could finally see where it had been and where it was going.
His left eye pulsed faintly, not painful, but present—like a reminder.
Jake stared at the gold chart for a long mont, breathing steady. Then he whispered, almost to himself, "What... is this?" He reached for his notebook and, without thinking, began writing.
Support levels. Resistance zones. Montum shifts. Liquidity sweeps. The words ca out clean, confident—things he’d studied but never been able to apply like this.
His heart beat faster, but his hands stayed calm.
Because this wasn’t excitent. This was sothing else. This was a weapon. Jake’s eyes flicked to the ti on the corner of his screen. He didn’t know why, but he suddenly felt like he was racing sothing. As if whatever had opened inside him had a tir. And if he didn’t move now, it might close again.
He clicked "New Order." Then he paused.
Outside his window, the city kept moving. Inside his room, Jake Rivers was about to take the first step toward becoming soone the world would eventually fear—quietly, cleanly, and without asking permission.
And he had no idea what it would cost.
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