MHA: Gamma Chapter 75 75: I messed up

Hey, everyone.

I wanted to take a mont to talk honestly about the last two chapters.

I ssed up

I know most of you enjoyed the chapters and did not see anything too wrong with them, and I really appreciate that. But after reading the complaints and criticisms from the readers who pointed out so problems, I realized that they were right.

The last two chapters were rushed.

The whole second Jack-Jack ntal dinsion situation does not really work the way I wrote it. Violet and Tony had actual reasons to be there, but Jack-Jack did not. At the ti, I only thought of a quick excuse that he insisted so much that they allowed him to co along, but looking back at it now, that does not make sense. Especially with Helen there, since she is the one person who can actually keep Jack-Jack under control.

Another problem is how I made Jack-Jack look.

Yes, he has always been childish, chaotic, and hard to control in the movies and comics, but in this story he is older. Because of that, he should understand better what is right and wrong. Instead, I ended up making him feel like a spoiled, reckless child who does whatever he wants without thinking about the consequences.

That was my mistake.

So, what happens now?

I will rewrite the last two chapters.

The current versions will be deleted tomorrow, and I will fix the plot holes and problems properly. Jack-Jack will no longer be present in that part of the story, Bakugo will no longer receive that buff, and the camp arc will continue normally.

As for Ryo and the potential shown in the last chapter, no, that will not stop being canon.

What was shown there is still canon to Ryo's power and future potential, but it will probably stay in limbo for a while until I find a better mont to bring it back into the story.

Now, about Jack-Jack's strength.

Yes, I know I made him too overpowered. The idea of him being almost invincible inside his own dinsion is absurd, but he is not truly 100% invincible. His dinsion is shaped by his mind, his emotions, and his desires.

What Ryo did at the end to win against him was not just simply overpowering him, he made Jack-Jack afraid of him.

And because that dinsion is tied to Jack-Jack's mind, fear weakens him and makes him vulnerable.

Ironically, his greatest strength is also his greatest weakness.

Still, even if the idea itself can work, I did not handle it properly in those chapters. That is why I am rewriting them.

I am sorry for the rushed writing and for the plot holes. I want this story to be better, and when I make a mistake, I would rather fix it than pretend it was fine.

Thank you to everyone who enjoyed the chapters anyway.

And thank you as well to the readers who pointed out the problems. I may not always notice every issue while writing, so honest criticism really helps.

That is all I wanted to say.