If you are wondering where is the new chapter.
It's called: 1.14 - The Dumbest Child.
I received so many critical feedback regarding my abrupt changes in scenes and wanted to correct the most jarring ones for the ti being, so the transitions are a bit smoother. 😁
I have been in a rush to get to the main plot (oto world's starting point), which caused the story to suffer from the rapid transitions, ti skips and the lack of details in certain events. So snippets were too short and confusing.
Thank you for all your feedback and I will continue to improve the story where possible!
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