Chūnin Exam Arena --- Konoha
The crowd had barely finished processing the Sage's warning about Kaguya when the scroll's next section snapped open like it had sowhere to be.
[Jinchūriki Comprehensive Ranking: Hosts of the Tailed Beasts, Past and Present.]
[Evaluated across: sync rate with Tailed Beast, combat contribution, historical significance, and potential ceiling.]
Group Chat:
[Eight-Tails: YOOOO!! This is MY ranking!! Or rather, it's Bee's ranking!! FINALLY!!]
[Nine-Tails: ...]
[One-Tail: Nine-Tails. You're very quiet.]
[Nine-Tails: I'm always quiet.]
[One-Tail: You're quiet in a different way right now.]
[Nine-Tails: I don't know what you're talking about.]
[Eight-Tails: Heheh! Nine-Tails! Your boy is definitely on this list!! Aren't you a little excited?!]
[Nine-Tails: I have no feelings about this ranking whatsoever.]
[Eight-Tails: SURE YOU DON'T!! HAHAHA!!]
[Nine-Tails: Gyūki. I will bite you.]
[Eight-Tails: You're in a cage!! You can't bite anyone!! HAHAHA!!]
Konoha --- Chūnin Exam Arena
Naruto was reading the chat.
He looked at the Nine-Tails' ssages.
He looked at the scroll.
He looked back at the Nine-Tails' ssages.
"...Hey," he said, to nobody in particular.
"What," said Sasuke.
"The fox is nervous."
"The fox is in a cage inside your stomach."
"Yeah but he's nervous. You can tell."
Sasuke looked at the chat.
At the Nine-Tails' increasingly terse responses to the Eight-Tails' harassnt.
He looked at Naruto.
"...Hm," he said.
Which was Sasuke's version of you're completely right but I won't say that.
The rankings began from the bottom.
7th through 4th filled in quickly.
Yagura Karatachi at 7th with a note that read exceptional potential, catastrophically compromised by external control --- ranking reflects what he could have been, not what he was allowed to beco.
The Fourth Mizukage himself, reading this from the Pure Land, went completely still.
He hadn't been able to say much since the scroll appeared.
Not because he didn't want to.
But because every ti he tried to speak about his ti as Mizukage, the words stuck in his throat.
He'd been a puppet.
He'd known, sowhere deep down, that sothing was wrong.
And he'd never been able to fight free of it.
[Yagura Karatachi: ...]
[Yagura Karatachi: Thank you.]
Nobody was sure who he was thanking.
The scroll, maybe.
Or just the act of being seen clearly for the first ti.
Killer Bee landed at 4th.
[4th Place: Killer Bee --- Jinchūriki of the Eight-Tails, Gyūki.]
[Highest sync rate with a Tailed Beast ever recorded in Hidden Cloud history. Unique combat style integrating eight swords, chakra cloaks, and a creative sensibility that defies strategic prediction.]
[Also: wrote 847 raps. The scroll has read all of them. The scroll has opinions.]
Hidden Cloud Village
Killer Bee looked up from the notebook he'd been writing in.
He looked at the scroll.
"...It read my raps."
Mabui, who had been standing behind him, cleared her throat.
"...Yes, Lord Bee."
"ALL of them."
"Apparently."
"And it has opinions."
"...It seems so."
Group Chat:
[Fourth Raikage A: Bee. DON'T. Ask.]
[Killer Bee: BRO!! THE SCROLL READ MY RAPS AND HAS OPINIONS!! I GOTTA KNOW!!]
[Fourth Raikage A: Bee, if you ask that scroll to critique your raps in front of the entire ninja world I will personally---]
[Killer Bee @Scroll: Hey scroll!! What'd you think, yo?! Drop the review, let it flow!!]
[Fourth Raikage A: BEE!!]
The scroll, after a three-second pause that felt deeply intentional, added a single line under Bee's evaluation:
[Rap #412 was genuinely excellent. The rest show effort.]
Hidden Cloud Village
Bee exploded.
"RAP 412!! THAT'S THE OCTOPUS BALLAD!! I KNEW THAT ONE WAS A BANGER!!"
He grabbed the nearest wall.
Not punching it.
Just grabbing it for support because the emotion was too large for his legs.
"GYŪKI!! DID YOU SEE THAT?!"
From inside Bee's chakra system, Gyūki the Eight-Tails made a sound that was sowhere between dignified acknowledgnt and involuntary pleased noise.
"The scroll is a man of culture," Bee announced to the room.
Mabui was writing sothing.
It said incident report: Lord Bee has attached himself to a wall.
A, watching this from his desk, made a long, low sound of suffering.
Group Chat:
[Fourth Raikage A: I want it noted that I take no responsibility for this.]
[Fifth Mizukage Terumi i: Lord Raikage, with respect, he is your brother.]
[Fourth Raikage A: I TAKE NO RESPONSIBILITY FOR THIS.]
Konoha --- Chūnin Exam Arena
Naruto was grinning.
"I like Bee-san," he said.
"You've never t him," Sakura pointed out.
"I feel like I know him."
"You feel like you know everyone."
"I do know everyone."
"Naruto, you didn't know who Danzō was two hours ago."
"...I know everyone good," he anded.
3rd Place appeared.
[3rd Place: Gaara of the Sand --- Jinchūriki of the One-Tail, Shukaku. Additionally: Suna-Suna Devil Fruit User.]
[Unprecedented combination of jinchūriki power and Logia-type Devil Fruit. Defense that approaches absolute. The only shinobi in recorded history to simultaneously house a Tailed Beast and operate a Devil Fruit ability.]
[Ranked 3rd current. Projected ceiling: 1st within five years, pending sync developnt with Shukaku.]
Hidden Sand Village
Gaara read it.
Once.
Twice.
Projected ceiling: 1st within five years.
Temari grabbed Kankurō's arm.
"Did it just say---"
"He could be number one," Kankurō finished, voice doing sothing strange.
Gaara said nothing.
Inside him, Shukaku was doing what he always did when faced with sothing he found aningful.
He got loud.
[One-Tail Shukaku: I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT!! DID YOU SEE?! PROJECTED CEILING FIRST!! TAKE THAT, NINE-TAILS!!]
[Nine-Tails: ...The ranking said Gaara's ceiling. Not yours.]
[One-Tail Shukaku: WE'RE A PACKAGE DEAL!!]
[Nine-Tails: You are inside him. He is not inside you.]
[One-Tail Shukaku: SEMANTICS!! WE'RE RANKED THIRD AND CLIMBING!!]
[Nine-Tails: ...]
[Eight-Tails: Nine-Tails. Your boy is coming up next. I can feel you sweating from here.]
[Nine-Tails: I do not sweat. I am a chakra construct.]
[Eight-Tails: SWEATING!! HAHAHA!!]
2nd Place appeared.
The scroll took its ti again.
That deliberate pause.
Long enough for the entire ninja world to realize sothing.
There were only two places left.
Second and first.
And everyone already knew who was going to be first.
They were standing in the arena eating a second bag of chestnuts that Aya had produced from sowhere.
The question was who was second.
[2nd Place: Uzumaki Kushina --- Forr Jinchūriki of the Nine-Tails.]
Reaper's Belly
Kushina made a noise.
It was a short noise.
Startled.
Involuntary.
"Minato---"
"I see it."
"I'm SECOND?!"
"You're second."
"On the JINCHŪRIKI RANKING?!"
"On the Jinchūriki ranking. Yes."
She was staring at her own na on the scroll with the expression of soone who had not been expecting to be called on and had accidentally given the right answer.
"But---I'm dead," she said. "I shouldn't be eligible---"
"The ranking says past and present," Minato said. "You were the Nine-Tails' jinchūriki for most of your life."
"But I---" She stopped. Read the evaluation.
[Uzumaki Kushina. The Red Hot-Blooded Habanero. Previous host of the Nine-Tails, Kurama. Seal specialist of Uzumaki lineage. Maintained the Nine-Tails' containnt through willpower and sealing arts during a period when forced extraction should have killed her twice over.]
[Ranked 2nd not for combat output but for what her seal preserved: the circumstances of her death created the conditions under which Naruto Uzumaki --- ranked 1st --- was born into the relationship with the Nine-Tails he will eventually have.]
[Without Kushina's seal, there is no Naruto's seal. Without Naruto's seal, there is no harmony.]
[The foundation is always the foundation, even when nobody sees it.]
Kushina read the last line.
The foundation is always the foundation, even when nobody sees it.
She sat with that for a long mont.
"Minato," she said. Very quietly.
"Mm."
"It said I was the foundation."
"Yes."
"For Naruto."
"Yes."
She covered her face with both hands.
She was not crying.
She was a very tough woman.
The Red Hot-Blooded Habanero did not cry over scroll evaluations.
She was absolutely crying.
Group Chat:
[Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze: Kushina is second.]
[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: WOW!! KUSHINA!! AMAZING!!]
[Uzumaki Mito: Well done, Kushina. You were always remarkable.]
[Uzumaki Mito: Clan pride.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: Lady Mito--- I---]
[Uzumaki Mito: Don't. Just accept it.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: ...Yes, Lady Mito.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: ...DATTEBANE!! I'M SECOND!! MINATO DID YOU SEE?!]
[Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze: I see it. I've been watching you for twenty seconds.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: I'M SECOND!! SECOND PLACE ON THE WHOLE JINCHŪRIKI RANKING!!]
[Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze: Yes.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: AND NARUTO IS GOING TO BE FIRST!!]
[Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze: Probably.]
[Kushina Uzumaki: WE DID THAT!! WE MADE THAT HAPPEN!! DATTEBANE!!]
Minato was smiling so hard it had gone past the point where smiling was a facial expression and beco sothing more structural.
Konoha --- Chūnin Exam Arena
Naruto had read Kushina's evaluation.
He'd read it twice.
He looked at where the 1st place section was about to fill.
He already knew it was going to be him.
The chat had basically been saying it for five minutes.
The math was obvious.
But knowing sothing was coming and having it actually happen were different things.
He'd learned that about four tis today.
"Oi," he said.
"What," said Sasuke.
"When it cos up---don't say anything."
Sasuke looked at him.
"I just want to---" Naruto stopped. "I just want it to be quiet for a second when it cos up. Just for a second."
Sasuke held his gaze for a mont.
"Okay," he said.
"That's it? No argunt?"
"You asked for one quiet second. It's not unreasonable."
Naruto blinked.
"...You're being weirdly decent today."
"I'm always decent."
"You threw into a wall three weeks ago."
"That was training."
"It was NOT---"
The scroll filled.
[1st Place: Uzumaki Naruto --- Jinchūriki of the Nine-Tails, Kurama.]
[Rated across all trics: highest future ceiling of any jinchūriki in recorded history. Unique in that his bond with the Nine-Tails will eventually transcend the host-beast frawork entirely --- not jinchūriki and Tailed Beast, but partners.]
[Also: the only jinchūriki who ever responded to his Tailed Beast's killing intent by trying to befriend it.]
[The scroll does not have a category for that. It created one.]
[Reward: Kurama Resonance Token --- Allows Naruto Uzumaki and the Nine-Tails to sense each other's emotional state across the internal barrier. No communication. No chakra transfer. Just awareness. A beginning.]
One quiet second.
Naruto was holding it.
He'd asked for it and he was using it.
He read the only jinchūriki who ever responded to his Tailed Beast's killing intent by trying to befriend it and he thought about being alone in a sewer in his own mind facing sothing enormous and hateful and thinking, sohow, even then, that maybe if he just---
Maybe if he just---
Inside the cage---
The Nine-Tails felt the Resonance Token settle into the space between them like a warm pressure against bars that had always been cold.
He didn't move.
He looked at it.
He felt, very clearly, through the new token ---
Naruto's quiet.
Not emptiness.
Not sadness.
The specific quiet of soone holding sothing carefully because it matters.
The Nine-Tails sat with that feeling for a mont.
Then, to nobody, in the dark:
...Fine.
Fine.
Have your quiet second.
He would not be ntioning this to Shukaku.
Group Chat:
[One-Tail Shukaku: NINE-TAILS. The token activated. I can feel it from here.]
[Nine-Tails: ...]
[One-Tail Shukaku: Nine-Tails.]
[Nine-Tails: DON'T.]
[One-Tail Shukaku: How does it feel?]
[Nine-Tails: I SAID DON'T.]
[Eight-Tails: How does it feel Nine-Tails!! HAHAHA!!]
[Nine-Tails: I hate all of you.]
[Eight-Tails: No you don't!! HAHAHA!!]
[Nine-Tails: ]
The empty ssage sat in the chat for several seconds.
[One-Tail Shukaku: ...Did he just send a blank ssage?]
[Eight-Tails: He's flustered!! THE NINE-TAILS IS FLUSTERED!! THIS IS THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!!]
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