1. The inspiration for this level’s setting cos from the fourth mission of "Call of Duty 6: Modern Warfare 2": No Russian. This material was provided by a friend. Initially, I planned to unfold the story from a smaller scene, depicting a street brawl among thugs, but my friend ntioned that readers nowadays prefer grander scenes and that small scenes don’t attract as much attention, so he suggested this material to . After I checked it out, I was indeed quite impressed; you can look it up yourselves.
2. Regarding the reincarnation chanism, so readers have comnted that the plot seems repetitive or the pacing is too slow. I will pay attention to this issue because the level’s plot is entirely original. I borrowed the narrative style from "Source Code" to convey the protagonist’s changes after each round of dying and reloading. However, it turned a bit sluggish because, after all, movies and novels are different.
I will certainly improve the pacing in future levels. The first mission required so groundwork, emotions, and mainline developnt, which I have already tried to reduce as much as possible. I will keep this in mind going forward.
3. As for character developnt, this is sothing I realized was a weakness since I wrote "Hunting." Apart from the main character, the supporting characters are sowhat stereotypical. In "Ghosts and Gods," I focused on strengthening this aspect because I enjoy writing about the stories behind the characters. But when writing "Crisis," I made the sa old mistakes. Characters like Jillian appear a bit one-dinsional. I once considered sacrificing the middle-aged cop to highlight his brilliance, but I abandoned the idea to avoid a sluggish plot. I will try to emphasize the characters more through dialogue, actions, and expressions in the future.
4. At the beginning of the new book, I saw many old readers from "Wilderness" and "Hunting" co to support , which was really touching. Thank you all for your recomndations, monthly votes, and rewards. I will put in great effort to update frequently and update well! Update as soon as possible! I also hope everyone can continue supporting because now whether a book can advance depends entirely on the follow-up data.
5. This is the first ti I have written a complete outline before creating a book, and I hope I can take a step further with this book. I also hope I can write a story that everyone will be more satisfied with.
Thank you!
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