The room settled.
"Everyone here represents a faction that has, at various points, been in opposition to every other faction in this room," she said. "That history is real.
I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t exist or that it’s going to disappear because we’re sitting around the sa table." She paused. "What I’m asking is that we set it aside for the work. Not forever. Just for the hours we’re in this room." She looked around the table. "The reform we’re building is going to outlast all of us. It needs to be built properly. That requires everyone here doing the hard thing of putting the work above the history."
The room beca silent.
Then Petra said....."That’s a reasonable ask."
"Thank you," Eve said.
"I said it’s reasonable," Petra said. "I didn’t say it would be easy."
"Nothing worth doing is easy," Eve said.
Aldous made a sound that might have been a laugh.
One of the Military faction commanders....a woman nad Bren who had said nothing yet looked at Petra with the expression of soone deciding whether they liked her.
Apparently she did. She nodded once.
"Let’s begin," Eve said.
She started with the section everyone agreed on.
The oversight chanism.
Not because it was the most important section. Because starting with agreent built sothing in the room. A small shared experience of moving in the sa direction. She had learned that from watching her mates....Damian always started difficult pack conversations with the thing everyone could say yes to.
The oversight chanism passed with minor modifications in forty minutes.
Corin’s people had three andnts. Two were incorporated imdiately.
The third required discussion, a question about the review body’s authority to examine historical Conclave decisions, not just current ones.
That was the first real mont.
The Military faction wanted historical review limited to the past twenty years.
The Revolutionary faction wanted no limit.
The Bloodline Council said nothing for a long mont.
Then Vael spoke.
His voice was quiet and carried the weight of soone who chose words carefully because they had learned a long ti ago that the wrong word in the wrong room cost things that couldn’t be recovered.
"The historical record matters," he said. "We have seen what happens when inconvenient history is buried. Seven bloodlines dissolved over twenty years because nobody was looking at what was happening to the legal structures underneath them." He paused. "I would support unlimited historical review scope."
The Military faction commander looked at him.
"The Military faction has historical decisions that would not survive public scrutiny," Bren said. Flat. Direct. The honest version of the objection.
"So does every faction in this room," Vael said. "Including ours."
Silence.
"The question," Eve said, "is whether we build a system that protects everyone’s uncomfortable history or one that makes it impossible for any one faction to exploit another’s." She looked around the table. "Those are different goals. I know which one I’m building toward."
Bren looked at her.
"Unlimited historical review," Bren said. "But with a defined process for how findings are handled. Not public exposure of everything. Findings go to the oversight body first. They determine what requires action and what is historical record without current relevance."
Corin leaned forward. "That’s acceptable."
Tam was already writing.
Petra looked at Bren with the expression she had given Eve in their first eting.
Reassessnt.
The Military faction commander had just proposed a compromise that was more sophisticated than anyone had expected from her.
"Agreed," Eve said. "Tam....note the andnt. Unlimited historical scope, findings process as described by Commander Bren."
Tam wrote.
The andnt passed. The representation reform was harder, She had known it would be.
Weighted voting was the section where the Military and rchant factions had the most to lose and the Revolutionary faction had been fighting for the longest and the history in the room was most present.
Aldous presented the rchant faction position carefully. He acknowledged the concession. He didn’t perform enthusiasm about it. He just laid out the numbers the way he always laid out numbers and said this is what the long term looks like and this is why it’s worth it.
Bren said the Military faction accepted the change with one condition, a defined transition period for the security decision protocols that currently used weighted voting.
"How long," Eve said.
"Eighteen months," Bren said.
"Twelve," Eve said.
Bren looked at her.
"The security protocols are complex," Bren said. "Rebuilding them under equal representation requires consultation across all factions. Eighteen months is realistic."
"Fifteen," Eve said. "With quarterly progress reports to the full working group."
Bren considered it.
"Fifteen months," she said. "Accepted."
Corin was very quiet through this exchange.
Eve looked at him when it was done.
He was looking at the table with an expression she recognized.
The expression of soone watching sothing they had filed forty seven motions about finally, actually moving.
"Corin," she said.
He looked up.
"Are you okay," she said.
He held her gaze for a mont.
"Yes," he said. His voice was slightly rough. "I’m fine."
Petra put her hand briefly on his arm.
He straightened.
"I’d like to propose an additional andnt to the representation section," he said. His voice was professional again. "A formal acknowledgnt in the text that the previous weighted voting system caused docunted harm to certain factions and bloodlines. Not as a punitive asure. As historical record."
The Military faction commander looked at the table.
Aldous looked at his folder.
Vael looked at Corin.
"We support that andnt," Vael said.
Eve looked at Bren.
Bren was quiet for a long mont.
"The Military faction accepts the andnt," she said. "On the condition that the acknowledgnt applies to all factions equally. Not singling out specific ones."
"Agreed," Corin said.
"Agreed," Eve said. "Tam."
They broke at noon.
Tea and food that Raphael’s people brought in. Twelve people who had been sitting across from each other in various states of opposition for decades standing around a table eating sandwiches.
Eve moved through the room.
She stopped at Aldous first. He was looking at his notes and eating without attention to what he was eating.
"You ca yourself," she said.
He looked up. "I did."
"You said you’d send representatives," she said.
"I changed my mind," he said. "After the third reading of your outline I decided this was worth my ti personally." He paused. "I was right."
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