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He reset. Changed approach again.
Instead of trying to track all three, he stopped tracking. He dropped low, compressed himself tight, and launched — not at a clone, not at Mira, but at the floor space between them, driving through the center of their formation before they could close the gap. The move was disorienting, a body moving in a direction that broke the pattern they’d been building around him, and for a mont all three of them were reacting rather than acting. There was a half-second where the clones’ positioning lagged behind their purpose, where Mira’s eyes moved to recalculate and found him already sowhere her calculation didn’t account for.
He ca up behind the formation, grabbed the nearest clone by the back of the collar, and used the full reach of an extended arm to slam it into the second clone before either could fully turn around. Both dissolved on impact — not dramatically, no sound, just the quiet erasure of things that had never quite been real.
Just Mira again. Twice now he’d stripped them away and left her alone, and each ti it had cost her montum she couldn’t fully rebuild. The clones weren’t just numbers. They were rhythm, pressure, the ability to occupy three points of his attention simultaneously and force a mistake. Without them, the fight beca smaller. More honest.
She was still standing. Still thinking. Her breathing had evened out again through sheer discipline, jaw set, eyes steady, processing what had just happened with the particular stillness of soone who’d trained themselves not to let frustration read on their face. She didn’t summon the clones a third ti, not imdiately. She needed a different angle. She ca at him straight, one on one, trading her nurical advantage for speed — faster without the concentration split, sharper, leaner in her movent. Sothing clarified in her when the clones dropped. Like she stopped managing a system and started fighting.
She landed three good hits in quick succession. A hook that caught his ear. A body shot that slipped under his guard at an angle his stretch didn’t fully cover — she’d been watching for the gap, waiting for it, and she found it cleanly. A low kick to the sa shin she’d caught earlier, harder this ti, and she heard the small sound he made through his teeth when it connected.
He was human underneath the ability. She could feel that now.
But so was she.
He caught her on the fourth exchange — a sudden elongated jab that covered more distance than she’d accounted for, snapping into her cheek and snapping her head sideways. The impact was clean. She took a step back, eye watering, vision briefly doubling, and before she could reset he was already moving — closing distance with that unnatural stretched stride, the kind of movent that always looked wrong no matter how many tis you saw it, like sothing out of fra that kept arriving anyway. One arm wrapping around her waist and the other locking up her lead arm, pulling her in tight against him.
She pulled. He stretched with her, the grip extending rather than breaking, no matter how much space she tried to create between them. She tried to twist out of the waist hold and felt it simply adjust around her, reshaping itself to maintain contact, his arm lengthening in small incrents to compensate for every shift she made. It was like trying to escape sothing that had no fixed shape to run out of. Every angle she found, it closed. Every gap she forced, it filled. His ability wasn’t just about reach — it was about continuity. He could maintain a hold the way water maintains contact with a surface. There was no leverage point that stayed solid long enough to use.
She summoned one clone — her last real option — and felt it land a hard blow across his back. He bent forward with it, spine arching, the impact real enough that she felt his grip briefly tighten rather than loosen, the instinct to hold on overriding everything. But the grip held. She summoned the second, driving it in from the side, targeting the ribs, and he absorbed that too, torso compressing and rebounding like sothing built to give without releasing, arms never loosening.
The clones hit him twice more between them. He took every single one.
Mira’s legs began to burn from the effort of trying to drive herself free. Her arms ached — not the sharp ache of a bad hit, but the deep structural ache of muscles that had been working too long against sothing that simply wouldn’t give. The clones flickered — concentration fracturing under the strain of maintaining them while simultaneously fighting, while simultaneously trying to breathe, while her body sent up the quiet distress signals she’d learned to ignore but couldn’t quite manage to this ti — and then they were simply gone, unraveling quietly as she ran out of the focus needed to hold them. No dramatic collapse. Just absence.
Just her. His grip still firm.
She tried once more — a last hard pull, committing everything she had left to it, every bit of weight and leverage and stubbornness she could pull from the bottom of herself — and went nowhere. The hold didn’t strain. It didn’t creak or bend or give her anything to work with. It simply remained.
After a long mont, she stilled.
The room settled around that stillness. The kind of quiet that follows sothing that’s been decided. Her chest rose and fell. His did too. Neither of them moved for a breath, two breaths, three — the kind of pause where both people in it know what it ans but neither has said so yet.
Jelo stood with his arms folded tight across his chest, jaw set, eyes fixed on the floor. Atlas hadn’t moved from where he’d been standing since the second clone dissolved, watching with the focused neutrality of soone cataloguing rather than reacting. Tongen watched from the side, expression completely unreadable, the sa way it always was when he was thinking sothing he hadn’t decided to say yet.
"Lucan," Sherlock said from across the room, simply and cleanly, the way you say a na when there’s nothing else that needs to be added.
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