Oh hello, there you might be confused about why I’ve blown up the walls. Have I gone ntal? I got pissed so much that I want to ruin the entirety of the 3rd arc? Yes and no, I’ve realized one crucial thing I’ve done so horribly wrong and decided to change it
[Review: Hi author and I’d like to say one thing, what the fuck is this 3rd arc huh!!!? Why is the mc not facing any hardships? This is the third trial and he’s just laying his ass down about half the Chapters in the RPG arc]
([Rewrite system: The half of the 3rd arc of the author [Reborn Flas] book volu 1 has been detected to be botherso!!!
Crisis: Due to being laid back in this arc, the main protagonist never had any struggles and he didnt gain a sense of growth
Possible outco: The author can choose to ignore this and continue with the plot as it is, or would you like to [Rewrite] it?]
Yes, I rember this review from a reader and I noticed how boring the plot was when he didn’t have any troubles. Even the Rewrite system gave a heads-up before I ca here in the first place. So that’s the main reason why I didn’t head back ho even though I’d already done a lot. Since im the main enemy of everyone it’s a waste to get on the good side of things. It’s better if I’ve burned everything to the ground and achieved my desired results
([Rewrite mission:
[A hint of chaos]: The 3rd arc wasn’t engaging and prove no worth to the storyline of your novel. After the author notices how even he couldn’t predict the action of his main character which led to the awakening of an anomaly. Take this chance as a ans of discipline and giving your character a spook of a lifeti
Difficulty: C, out of the missions so far this mission will greatly affect the plot unlike the ti you’ve prevented the heroine’s trauma
Rewards: ???, The rewards will be presented once the system has made its judgnt at the end of the mission
Duration: It doesn’t have any particular ti limit, you could even keep this mission until the end of the trials. But the author has the choice to decide to end at any given ti as long as he made so progress
Requirent: Make a ss of the plot and make the main character struggle to complete his newfound challenge. You can do any ans necessary of achieving this mission, but the main character requires to survive. A story isn’t great without any struggles, and if there’s a hero there must be a villain]
’In the original plot, the arrival of the demons should be midway between the start of the endga. But an early appearance doesn’t hurt, now that their attention is drawn to the chaos, I can do my real objective. The saintess who’ll bless the heroes with the unrivaled power to beat the Demon king. it’s none other than the holy empire’s princess, a brute force thod will be hard and I’ll stand out. Luckily I have Zeke’s communicator, it has the layout of the secret passages and traps alike,’
"Silvia, report back to Kyo min soo and tell him that his entrance has been set. Make sure you tell him to stall as much as possible, I’ll be taking this chance to steal the most important piece. Before that thing, the character becos a threat, right here and now I’ll have to end its life," When every piece was set he finally made his move when every guard there was preoccupied with his bait
He sets off to claim the life of an unwanted variable and before he does so he orders the caged beast to run rampant in his absence. A nacing smile lingers from afar filled to the brim with bloodlust and an undesirable thirst for blood. A monster was about to arrive in a form of a beast with both the might of a giant and a mind of a strategist
[System: The player Kyo min soo has activated the skill called [Empowernt]
[Empowernt]: Anything that swore allegiance to him or the Demon King will be granted a buff. This buff will increase their overall stats by 20% and they’ll begin to hear his words. Because of this special effect, the player can appoint any orders to change their formation mid combat]
"What took you so long? I’ve grown bored watching these wusses following my every command. That emblem, so it’s the ti! Hehehehe, finally I’ll get so fun!!! I haven’t had so blood splattered on my body since the monster stampede. I can’t kill everything but it’s better than nothing, apart from the players I can kill as many npc’s as I want," With his duties to command their fleet shifted from Rachel he was finally free to enter the battlefield
This was the ti when imperial guards weren’t even matched with what they unleashed. A figure of black ca running at a speed where it was nothing but a streak of darkness and blood spilling in its path. When he entered through the broken walls of the empire his body was there for all to see him in his glory. A tall and gigantic beast was standing in front of the walls nacingly whilst a surge of darkness crept into the ground
From this point on it he’s identity wasn’t speculated as a re elite of the demon race when his body influences his troops. It was unmistakable that he was none other than a mber of the four heavenly demons which were second to their lord’s power. The guard cowers in fear when they t his gaze and their boots shake with the amount of darkness he carries. But they weren’t fully hopeless, a few of them from the ground kept their sanity and charges for the intent to kill
"There has to be sothing wrong with the plot of the ga! How, how did one of the heavenly demons escape~ Ughhh!!!" Hugo received a fully received impact of his fist which landed in his face
The heroes haven’t been graced by the power of the saintess and they only pose a power beyond that of an elite. If it weren’t for that, he wouldn’t be able to withstand a single hit and live to tell his tale. Even with a hint of heavenly aura, his strength never succumbed to the demonic energy. He even managed to extinguish a portion of Kyo min soo’s power though he too had suffered from his attack
’This is what the boss called the reaction ’Equivalency’ these two divinities will deal an ex extra percentage in their opposition. But the thing that decides which attribute wins the fight is the amount. I got directly struck by his blade and before it could do anything I blocked it with my hands. I lost a portion of my darkness, but his in a worse shape compared with myself. Killing players here don’t matter since they can live and spectate the outco. But I’ve given my word since he permitted to blow off so steam I can’t kill a player,’
Even though he already knew this fact, he retained his smile. He was never told he couldn’t beat them up, and he followed through with Morris’s loophole. Deep down he knew he was being played but he never questions his choice and simply allowed himself to enjoy. But before he could resu his match with Hugo who’s slowly recovering from his attack, a third party appeared out of the blue
"Stay away from him!" He took a step back when he heard the sounds of a feint sound of a fast and accurate release of an arrow
Cha Yoona defied him from ever getting close to their ace in the whole and their tank descent in their ti of need. Gale rushes at him and bashes him to the wall where he ets with their finisher Shin Chaerim. She was about to reach his vitals but his instincts were faster than her blade and she evaded his attack. The sheer force blew the remains of the skies for all to see and with not a single one in his vicinity, a powerful spell was released
"Greater casting, Inferno!!!" The sounds of the spells roared and their surroundings were covered in ashes. But even with all of that their enemy remains, his smile was wide and his eyes were glowing behind the smoke. They’ve gazed upon the eye of a monster in need of a worthwhile match and they find themselves shaking in his presence
"I take it back!!! You guys are fun, I’ve never felt so exhilarated apart from fighting the Demon King. Teamwork, coordination, trust, and lastly power. But you’re still weaker if compared to , but even though im outnumbered this situation of mine... Is only filling the emptiness deep within my body, co, let’s see what you’re made of!!!" A beast of a character who hasn’t ever appeared in the story makes his debut
There were tis when he played a big role such as the ti when he fought in the rampage of the asura. The ti when he tank’s his way through the flurry of attacks made by the homunculus severous. But even with all of this he never was the one in the spotlight. So say he shared that stage with the rest and only a few were said about his contributions. But right now, he’s a wall that the protagonist and his crew require to overco
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