KrazeKode Books

Rise of the Devourer

Author: KrazeKode Realm: Fantasy

NoahBrownhadagiftforfighting.Unfortunatelypunchingthingsdidn'tpaythebills,atleast...Readmore NoahBrownhadagiftforfighting.Unfortunatelypunchingthingsdidn'tpaythebills,atleastuntilhediedandanEldritchgodfoundhissoul.Theencounterledhimtoanewworld,summonedbybloodycultists,withnothingbuttheshirtonhisback,andastrangeiteminhissystemmenu.[???]:Asourceofinfinitepotential.Perhapshe'dfinallygettoputhisgiftstogooduse.Collapse LitRPG,PortalFantasy,Isekai,AgeProgression,MaleProtagonist,HighFantasy,SwordAndMagic,WeaktoStrong Ihaven'treadityet,Butitlookspromising.AnMCwhointhedescriptionsaysthatHeisonlygoodatpunching?Thatsrefreshing.ItsabreatheoffreshairfromalltheschemingMCwhohastobeineverynovelandsomehowhastoalwayshaveabigbrain.Here?AnMCwhopunchesisNovel.(punintended) Ilovehoweveryoneisbashingthemcforbeingidioticandbeingemotionallyallovertheplace.Heistransportedtoaplacehehasneverbeenemidiatlywitnessingacultsactivitieswhicharen'tanythingpleasantandthenbeingforcedtofightforhisrighttolive.Anyoneinasituationevensimilartothatwouldbethesame.Ifyougivethebookachancehestartstocometotermswithwhatishappeninginthesecond"book"andhischaracterdevelopsalotemotionally.I'dgivethefirst"book"a3/5goodworldandwritingqualitybutleavescharacterdevelopmentneeded.Thisproblembecomesbetterinthesecond"book",so"book"2wouldgeta4/5forme.Tryingtogiveagoodenoughexplanationwithoutgivinganyspoilers. Anovelofdisappointment.Afoolmcwithaherocomplex.Heisn'teveninhisownworldbutwanttoprotecttheweak.Anextremelystupiddecision.Thenovelhadpotentialbutgotruinedin17chapters.Animmatureidioticmcwhois24yearsold. Bookhassillymcwithherocomplex,whodefeathisenemythroughpoweroffriendship(probably).Ididn'tseeanydevouring,carnageanddestruction,justmcsolvingquestuponquestormaybeithasaslowstoryandIdidn'treadthatfar. Thisseemstohavebeenwrittenbyafanof"HeWhoFightsWithMonsters"withasimilarsystem,powers,characters,andorganizations.UnfortunatelytheauthorcannotwritelikeShirtaloonorwhateverhisnamewas,anddeliveredapieceofjunk.Itwouldn'tbebadatalliftheMCwasn'tanimmatureidiotwithoutselfcontrol.Anyofusreaders,placedinthatsituation,wouldactwithdignitasratherthanajumpingclownthatcan'tcontrolhimselforhismouth.Idon'tfindtheMCfunny,admirable,orrelatable.It'sliketheauthoristryingtocopyJasonAsanobutlackstheskillandthecharacteriswrecked.KilltheMCandwritesomethingbasedupontheworldlike"fightsmonsters"andIwouldwanttoreadit. IfYouWantANovelWithLameIdioticSillyMcWellMyFriendLookNoFurtherThisIsYourNovelPlusItHasALameComedyWhichMakesItMoreGarbage Thisnovelhastobewrittenbyaredditor unfortunatelythisstoryisprettyrubbish,mcsometimeslookslikeanidiotteenager,buthe's24yearsold.mcfaintsallthetime,feelslikethrowingup,getsirritatedeasily,isaclownandwantstobealittlehero,heonlywinsfightsbyluckanditseemshewillalwayskeepgettingbeatenupinfights.butIonlyread22chapter,maybeitwillgetbetter.somereviewssayhe'sOP,itdoesn'tlooklikethat'sgoingtobeit.mcwhoalmostdiesallthetime,isnottheop.Iwilltrymore,butIhavelittlehopethatitwillimprove TheGuyIsAClassicComedyClown....ItSeemsHeWillKeepFaintingAllTheTime #Panic#chaptersbeingupdatedindoublonsortriplons! Canusendaddressforthosepls? Theguybecameatemponassoonasthenovelbegan.Allhighandmightytoapologizing,beinghelplessandexplaininghimselftotheveryfirstwomanhemet.Borderlinebegging.theauthorisasimp.Writesacharactersodesperatetopleaseawomanhejustmetincludingtellingherallhissecrets i'veonlyread12chapterssofarsoican'tbesure,butifyou'retalkingaboutthefirstwomanhemeetsidon'tthinkhe'ssimple.he'sjustanidiot,thefirstmanhemetatthebarhealreadyarrivedsayinghejustwokeupandmomentslaterhecomesscreamingatthemayor'shousethathejustwokeup,thatseemsverystupidtome.hejustdidn'tsaythatheisfromanotherworldbecausethewomanadvisedhim,becausewithhisstupidityhewouldbescreamingthathecamefromanotherworld.atleasthedidn'ttellaboutthegodofthevoid,thatwouldbereasontodrop.sofarigiveita2/10looksabitinterestingbutyourmcisreallydumb,he's24buthe'sactinglikeadumbteenager

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