I've decided to do a rewrite.
Specifically for book 2.
After a long ti stuck on one chapter, and seeing many comnts complaining about the overall direction of the story after book 1, I realised that I sort of agree. I initially only really had the outline of the first arc thought out in my head, and a lot of people pointed out that that part of the story is by far the most interesting. I kind of stumbled into the dungeon mini arc by accident, though I'm happy how that turned out, so I'm not touching that either.
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Having no concrete idea of where I wanted to take the story when I started book 2 but still wanting to write sothing, the story kinda went nowhere. There wasn't really a goal or target, and the whole Luterra arc feels lacking at the mont. Plus a lot of people have rightfully pointed out that Alex being able to suck on monsters with no downsides removes a large point of interest from how he was gonna hide his monstrous side from the world, so that's gonna change too.
Anyway, I don't want to spoil the rewrite for you, so I'll shut up. I'm going to reupload the story and change so shit, and to find out what, you'll have to read it. I'm not done with the rewrite yet, but it should be up in a month or so at most. If anyone still rembers this story, and cares enough to continue reading, I hope you co over at that ti, since you know I love you all (platonically).
Thanks for coming to my TED talk, and see you in a month.
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